but for a little Critique it looks a little perspective wise flat maybe add a bit of shadow shading or vignetting [link] to take the edge of the right side (facing) white..thought I think this is your light point source which kinda throws that idea out the window humm just my thoughts sweetie, as you know Hope they help
Anyway I do like your creativity with this one dear
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