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HP Scanjet djf2100
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Jan 11, 2014, 8:48:27 PM
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Lost and Lonely by Ludifico Lost and Lonely by Ludifico
nib + ink
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:iconeuropeancookie:
Right off the bat, I already have a picture painted in my mind of what the full scene looks like. The trees are well made, I enjoy the use of shading and the shape of the trees being quite unique. There are, however, a few problems I have with the picture. One such problem is that I cannot tell if the trees at the bottom of the picture are separate from the ones at the top or if they are closer than the upper trees. Another problem I have is that I am unsure what is above the bottom trees. I assume that it's water which would fit well with the picture, yet I don't know for sure. Unfortunately, the piece's theme has been conveyed before in various settings and the piece does not leave me with a lasting impact.

Overall, I do like the piece and understand what it conveys. I do think more should have been added, but it's a good drawing. I only think some aspects should have been tweaked and some more foliage should have been added. Other than those points, it's quite well-drawn. Keep it up!
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jayfeatherXstick2 Featured By Owner May 29, 2014
hey, who knew you could do so much with only lines?
I really liked this. :)
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Ludifico Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you :bow:
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gnopur Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
so simple,yet so amazing :P
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Ludifico Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you :bow:
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rsiphotography Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014  Professional General Artist
superb work
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Ludifico Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you :hug:
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